学会游泳

350字
主题:自我认知、责任意识、意外启示、技能习得、生命敬畏

on a sunny day, down by the river, a fishermen -who does not know how to swim is in a world of his own, waiting for the fish to surrender and be the mans catch of the day, but in a slight error, the man slipped and fell into the river, all was seen by a young man who just happened to pass by, saw the whole scenario and saved the fishermen, the fishermen was quite ashame of himself for he a fishermen who can not swim, after the accident, the fishermen gave enough thought into wanting to learn to swim and thus beginning lessons for amateurs whom do not know how to swim.

一个晴朗的日子,在河边有一个不会游泳的渔民在自己的世界等待鱼投降,但一不小心,男子失足掉入河中,刚好一个年轻人路过看到,看到这个场景,年轻人救了渔民,渔民很惭愧自己虽然是一个渔民,但是他不会游泳,事故发生后,渔民们认真思考了学游泳的重要性,于是开始教那个不会游泳的渔民游泳。

精选读者点评

这“鱼投降”的说法真饱满!孩子,你让鱼自己举白旗,比老师讲十遍拟人还管用。后半段中英文混着写,得改,但别急着删,先想想:如果全用中文,哪个词最能替掉“surrender”呀!

my day英语作文带翻译

450字
主题:校园生活、英语学习、家庭时光、课余活动

today is sunny. i get up early and read some english. then i have breakfast and go to school. in the morning we have four lessons, they’re two enlish lessons, one chinese lesson and one history lesson. i like english best. at noon we have lunch at school, we have rice and vegetables, but we don’t like them very much. in the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson. math is difficult, but i study hard. and we sing a beautiful song. we finish school at a quarter to five. i play basketball with my friends on the playground. it’s fun! then i go home and do my homework, ne_t i have dinner with my parents and watch tv. i go to bed at nine o’clock.

今天是阳光明媚的。我很早起床,读一些英语。然后我吃早饭,去上学。在早上我们有四个教训,他们两个英语课,一个中国课和历史课。我最喜欢英语。中午我们在学校吃午餐,我们吃米饭和蔬菜,但我们非常不喜欢他们。在下午我们有两个数学课程和一个音乐的教训。数学是困难的,但我努力学习。我们唱一首优美的歌曲。我们在四分之一到五完成学业。我和我的朋友打篮球在操场上。很有趣!然后我回家做作业,然后我和我的父母一起吃晚饭,看电视。我九点钟上床睡觉。

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英语句子基本通顺,时态用得挺稳,like、have、go这些动词都踩在点上。略显“a quarter to five”翻成“四分之一到五”太直了,孩子,咱们说“差一刻五点”多利落!还有“教训”这词儿吓我一跳,赶紧圈出来,是“课”不是“训”啊!

my childhood英语作文

400字
主题:亲情、童真、成长、快乐、家庭、回忆

i’d like to tell you something about my childhood. when i was si_ years old, i was a lovely girl!

one day, my father saw some fish in the river, so he asked me, “why can fish only live in water?” i thought about it, then i gave him the answer, “because there are some cats on the bank.” my father laughed when he heard that. then he said, “you are smart!” i was happy to hear that.

maybe you will say, “it’s a funny answer.” now, i think, it is very interesting. and now i am smart. my parents love me very much. i am so happy to have that childhood.

我想告诉你一些关于我的童年。当我六岁的时候,我是一个可爱的女孩!

一天,我爸爸在河里看见了一些鱼,他问我:“为什么鱼只能活在水里?“我想了一下,我就给了他答案,”银行里有一些猫,“我爸爸听到那个时候就笑了。”。然后他说:“你是聪明的!“我很高兴听到这个。

也许你会说,“这是一个有趣的答案。”现在,我想,它是非常有趣的。现在我很聪明。我的父母非常爱我。我很高兴能有这样的童年。

精选读者点评

“银行里有一些猫”,这句点睛之笔,把童言无忌的逻辑感和画面感全撞出来了!光是这句话,就值得在作文本上画三个圈。

父亲节作文 父亲节的英语作文

700字
主题:亲情、成长、感恩、温暖、守候、节日

关于父亲节的作文

happy fathers day

(父亲节快乐)

my dear dad:(我挚爱的爸爸)

today is fathers day.(今天是父亲节)i love my father very much.(我极爱我的父亲)i want to send my best wishes to you.(我要把我的祝福送给您)

i remember all the beautiful times

between us.(我记得我们在一起享有的美妙时光)sush as you hold my hand to see the brilliant sunshine over the land.(比如您牵着我的手看那灿烂阳光沐浴大地) you hold my hand across the flowering forest.(您牵着我的手穿越绿意盎然的大森林)you hold my hand to roam the endless grassland.(您牵着我的手徜徉于无边无际的草原) you hold my hand to play on the white beach near the equators island.(您牵着我的手在赤道小岛的白色沙滩上嬉戏)you hold my hand to visit the great terra-cotta warrious.(您牵着我的手参观宏伟壮观的秦始皇兵马俑) you hold my hand to run into the blue and shining seaside.(您牵着我的手在碧蓝晶莹的海边奔跑)you hold my hand to enjoy the sweet smell of the rain and dew.(您牵着我的手品尝雨露的甘甜)

many many things you are together with me.(如许多的事情,我们在一起经历。)we can count the stars.(我们一起数着星星)we can breathe deeply in the morning.(我们在清晨深深呼吸)we can walk in the dusk.(我们在黄昏漫步)

if you are with me,theres nothing between us.(如果您和我在一起,困难将不值一提)if you are with me,theres peace inside me.(如果您和我在一起,我的内心将充满平静)if you are with me,i will do all i can.(如果您和我在一起,我将尽我所能)

my dear dad,ilove everything of you,(我的好爸爸,我爱您的一切)your handsome(您的帅气),your laughing(您笑声),your words,(您的话语)your step(您的步伐),everything ,you know?(一切的一切,知道吗?)

so ,all together ,happy fathers day!(总之,父亲节快乐)

your dear honey

(您挚爱的甜心)

harry~~~

(哈利)

__.6.17.

(即日)

精选读者点评

哈!中英混搭得挺有创意,阳光、森林、草原、兵马俑全被“牵着手”串起来了,这沉浸感像放电影!稍显“赤道小岛的白色沙滩”和“秦始皇兵马俑”地理上隔了十万八千里,娃是不是把旅行记忆叠在一起啦?下次试试挑一个最动心的场景,写透它。

我的英语老师英语作文带翻译

400字
主题:师生情、成长陪伴、语言学习、温暖鼓励、榜样力量

张老师是我的英语老师。她长得很漂亮。看!她有一张圆圆的脸,两只小小的黑眼睛,一个小鼻子,一张大嘴巴和两只小耳朵。

她的头发又短又黑。她经常穿一条浅蓝色的裙子。她看起来像一个仙女。

张老师对我很好,所以她是我的好朋友。我的英语学得不好,她经常帮我学习英语。她常对我说:“一切会好起来的!”现在我的英语成绩提高了。张老师很高兴。

张老师是我最敬爱的老师,因为她不仅教给我知识,而且也把我带入一片新天地。

miss zhang is my english teacher. she is very beautiful. look! she has a round face, two small black eyes, a small nose, a big mouth and two small ears. her hair is short and black. she often wears a light blue dress.she looks like a fairy.

miss zhang is kind to me,so she is my good friend. my english is not very good. she often helps me with my english. she often says to me, “ every thing will be all right !”now my english is better. miss zhang is very happy.

miss zhang is my favourite teacher because she not only teaches me knowledge, but also leads me too a new world.

精选读者点评

张老师像仙女?这个比喻内容出彩!但“大嘴巴”和“小耳朵”放一起,读着有点滑稽,孩子是不是想说“笑起来尤其有感染力”?下次试试用动作或声音来写她,比如她批作业时眼镜滑到鼻尖的样子。

今天是母亲节

750字
主题:亲情、孝心、表达、成长、母爱、童年诚意

it was mother’s day. sun zheng thought he should do something for his mother. he decided to help his mother do some housework. after school he went to a shop to buy some food on his way home.

when he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn’t do the cooking well. thenhe cleaned the room. he felt very tired, but he was very happy.

when his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren’t so nice, they were very happy.they had their supper together. his mother said, thank you,my child!

今天是母亲节。孙峥觉得应该为妈妈做点事,他决定帮妈妈做些家务。放学回家的路上,他去商店买了食品。到家后,他尽全力做些好吃的,尽管他并不擅长烹任。做完饭,他又打扫了房间。他感觉有些累,但仍然很高兴。

当父母回来后,看见干净的房间和并不太荚味的菜,他们依然很高兴。他们一起吃了晚饭。妈妈说:“谢谢你,孩子。”

today is mother’s day. i know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework, others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. i want to say to her that i love her very much. but as a boy, it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. i think only girls can do that.

my mother is very kind. she takes care of me day and night.

she spends little money, but buys anything for me that i need.

this time i must show my love. i am going to give her a card and write like this, i love you, mother! i am going to put it under her pillow.

今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务,还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声,我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难,因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。

我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱,但能给我买我需要的任何东西。

这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你,妈妈”的卡片,我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。

精选读者点评

“男孩难说爱”那句,真透了,不是不会爱,是怕笨拙的爱被笑。后头悄悄塞卡片的细节,比直喊“我爱你”有力多了!

经典英语作文范文带翻译-一张全家福

450字
主题:家庭记忆、成长感悟、情感依恋、时光流转、身份认同

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i am so impressed by the family picture, it took when i was in grade 6. at that day, my mother woke me up in the morning, she told me that i should wash my face quickly, today our family had an important thing to do. so i got dressed, after finishing everything, i asked my mom what would i do ne_t, she said that our family would take a family picture, it meant so lot. i didn’t figure out what it was, but i thought it was so funny, so i stood as they asked, and smiled. two years pass, i now understand the meaning of the family picture, i take the picture when i am out for school. taking the picture is like my family around me.

对于全家福,我的印象很深刻,那是我六年级时候照的。那天,妈妈一大早就叫醒我,她告诉我我应该快速洗脸,今天家里有很重要的事情去做。所以我穿好衣服,在我做完一切以后,我问妈妈我接下来该做什么,她说家里待会要照全家福,这很重要。我不知道那是什么,但是我觉得那很有趣,所以我照他们说的站好和微笑。两年过去了,现在我懂得了全家福的意义,当我在外学习的时候我带着。带着全家福好比家人在我身边。

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这张全家福藏得精巧!六年级的懵懂笑脸,和现在离家读书时攥着照片的手,叠在一起看,心都软了。最后一句“像家人在我身边”,轻轻一落,全篇就亮点突出。

我的父亲英语作文-my father

250字
主题:亲情、成长、教育、热爱、责任、榜样

my father was born in 1962, in he bei. he began working at the age of 22. he is good at english, math,

music and pe, but he doesn do well in science. he likes sports very much. volleyball is his favorite. he is an english teacher now. my father is outgoing and humorous that his students all like him very much. he is kind but strict. i love my father.

我的父亲出生于1962年,在河北。他开始在22岁。他擅长英语,数学的工作,

音乐和体育,但他并没有在科学做好。他喜欢运动非常多。排球是他的最爱。他是一名英语老师了。我的父亲是外向,幽默,他的同学们都非常喜欢他。他是那种但严格的。我爱我的父亲。

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句子主干不清,“他开始在22岁”“并没有在科学做好”“是那种但严格的”,这些中式英语直译痕迹太重,得一句句掰开揉碎重说,别怕改三遍。

腊八节英语作文

350字
主题:民俗传承、家庭温情、节令饮食、文化认同、岁时节庆

today is the lunar december eighth day - the laba festival. the laba festival in china has a long tradition and history, on this day drink the laba laba rice porridge, do is the most traditional people all over the country, is also the most pay attention to the customs.

at night, dad with red jujube, lotus seeds, beans, peanuts, black beans, wheat berry, lily, eight kinds of material such as rice stayed up the whole pot of delicious rice porridge.

mom put porridge is good, in the table. i use the spoon gently drew a few times in a bowl, good let it cool faster. then, scoop a spoonful of their mouth. porridge boil rotten rotten, quickly melted in your mouth. i said to my father: dad, you can endure to laba rice porridge is really nice. the father said, you drink a bowl of laba porridge, you will happy auspicious. listen to father said these words, i feel very warm and happiness.

腊八节英语作文

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这碗腊八粥写妙了!“煮得烂烂的,入口即化”,舌头都尝到味儿了。后半段父子对话太自然,像真在饭桌边听见的。平心而论“laba laba rice porridge”重复两次,小笔误,圈出来啦~

简单my family英语作文带翻译

200字
主题:亲情、成长、家庭、爱、身份认同

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my nama is zhang ruipeng.my english name is dale.i have a grangparents have four sons.my tow uncle and my aunt and my father.my parents have a daughter ang son.this is me and my sister.i loves my famliy.and my family loves me.

我的名字是张瑞鹏。我的英文名字是戴尔。我爷爷奶奶有四个儿子。我的两个叔叔和我的姑姑和我的父亲。我的父母有一个女儿和儿子。这是我和我的妹妹。我爱我的家人和我的家人很爱我。

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哎哟,“my nama”“grangparents”“tow uncle”这些拼写小马虎,像没系好的鞋带,走两步就绊一下!建议抄三遍正确拼法,顺手把“loves”主谓一致也理一理~

英语作文我最喜欢的动物,鱼

200字
主题:自然之美、生命活力、童真视角、观察趣味

my favourite animal is fish.because they are very interesting.there are many kinds of fish.they are liveing in water very free.they are very colorful,some fish are red,some fish are white,and some fish are gold...so i like them very much !

我最喜欢的动物是鱼.因为他们是非常有趣的.鱼的种类非常多.他们是在水中自由自在的生活.他们是五颜六色的,一些鱼是红色的,一些鱼是白色的,一些鱼是黄金色的……我非常喜欢它们!!!!

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鱼在水里“very free”?这个表达真可爱!只是咱们中文说“自由自在”更顺溜~

国庆节

300字
主题:爱国情怀、童年礼赞、仪式感、成长见证、家国同构

今天是10月1日国庆节,是我们伟大的祖国妈妈60岁的生日。我想对祖国妈妈说一句——生日快乐!

october 1st today is the national day, is our great motherland mother 60 year old birthday. i want to say -- happy birthday to my motherland!

上午,妈妈打开电视机,叫我看阅兵式。我看见很多解放军叔叔和阿姨穿着漂亮的制服,排着非常整齐的队伍从天安门城楼前走过。他们排成的队伍就像一块块豆腐干,方方正正的,真是太神气了!

morning, my mother opened the tv, let me see the parade. i saw a lot of peoples liberation army uncle and aunt dressed in beautiful uniforms, row very neat team walked from the front of the tiananmen gate. they lined up a team is like a piece of tofu, fangfangzhengzheng, is really fantastic!

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“豆腐干”这个比喻太鲜活了!孩子眼里的整齐,就是方方正正、能咬出响儿来的那种劲儿,别改,留着!

自我介绍 self-introduction

200字
主题:成长、亲情、童年、归属感、生活日常

my name is li hua, i am a girl. i am ten years old. i was born in the summer, my birthday is in june. there are four people in my family, they are my father, my mother and my older brother. i have a dog, its name is dudu. i love my family very much.

我的名字叫李华,我是一个女孩。我10岁了。我在夏天出生,我的生日在六月。我家里有4口人,他们是我的爸爸、我的妈妈还有我的哥哥。我还有一只狗,它的名字叫嘟嘟。我非常爱我的家。

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李华同学,你把家里人和嘟嘟都写进去了,真像在跟老师聊天!“我分外爱我的家”这句悄悄藏了温度,圈出来啦~稍显“my name is li hua”后面逗号别丢呀,英文大小写也再瞄一眼?

简单的中秋节英语作文带翻译

200字
主题:家庭团聚、文化传承、节日喜悦、亲情温暖

mid-autumn day is chinese traditional festival, i am so happy to have this day with my family; my whole family will stay together this night to celebrate it, enjoy the full moon and eat mooncakes.about the mooncake,my mother and i like mooncakes with egg yolk. at last i wish every family a happy day on this day.

中秋节是中国的传统节日,我很高兴和家人一起度过这一天;我们全家将团聚于这一晚庆祝中秋并赏月、吃月饼。说到月饼,我和妈妈最喜欢吃带有蛋黄的中秋月饼。最后祝每一个家庭在这一天拥有幸福的一天。

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中英混搭挺有生活味儿!但“mid-autumn day”该写成“the mid-autumn festival”,专有名词首字母大写 冠词别漏啦~

英语作文-我最喜欢的老师my favourite teacher

250字
主题:师爱、成长、榜样、感恩、教育

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my teacher

my favourite teacher is my english teacher ms wu .her english name is lannie .she is a beautiful lady. she is very humorous.

but sometimes she is very strict with us. but all classmates love and respect her very much. after class she often helps us learn patiently.

i like my english teacher , because i think she is the best teacher in the world.

我最喜欢的老师是我的英语老师吴老师。她的英文名字是lannie。她是一位漂亮的女士。她很幽默。

但有时她对我们要求很严格。但是所有的同学非常爱和尊重她。下课后她经常很耐心的帮助我们学习。

我喜欢我的英语老师,因为我认为她是世界上的老师。

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lannie老师真有魅力!“幽默”和“严格”这对反义词被你轻轻一搭,人物就立住了。稍显“世界上的老师”漏了“最”字,快补上~

my family我的家庭英语作文翻译

350字
主题:亲情、责任、平凡之美、爱与陪伴、家的味道

i have a very happy family.there are four people in my family--my parents ,my younger brother and i.my fathther is working in another city,so he is always very busy.as a famous saying goes : there is always an able woman behind a successful man .,my mother is a housewife.she can cook very dilicious food and she is often busy with some houseworks.sometimes,brother and i help her tidy the house,but of course,we couldn tidy as clean as her.

i love my parents as well as my family.i hope we can be happy forever!

我有一个非常幸福的家庭。我的家庭有四个人——我的父母,我的弟弟和我的爸爸在另一个城市工作,所以他总是很忙。作为一个的谚语:“一个成功男人的背后有一个能干的女人。”,我母亲是个家庭主妇。她能做很美味的食物,她总是忙于做家务。有时,我和弟弟帮她收拾房子,当然,我们不能整齐清洁的她。

我爱我的父母以及我的家人。我希望我们能够永远快乐!

精选读者点评

句子太长啦!逗号用得像省略号,读着喘但是气~试试把“my father is working…”这句拆成两小句。

六一儿童节英语作文 我们自己庆六一儿童节

750字
主题:童年、节日、校园、成长、欢庆、集体

英语资源频道为大家整理的六一儿童节英语作文 我们自己庆六一儿童节,小编在这里祝所有小朋友大朋友们节日快乐 永葆童心。 今天上午,我和同学高高兴兴来到了学校,我们把清洁做完了就出教室玩儿了一会儿,老师就喊我们回教室,我们就马上跑进教室里,然后我和同学们就坐到了自己的座位上,lā(拉)了上课lín(铃),我们就拿着yǐ(椅)子走出去,来到学校的小操场上。我们把yǐ(椅)子放在了地上,我们就坐在了yǐ(椅)子上面。我就看见1~6年级都把yǐ(椅)子搬在了大操场上,rán(然)后同学们都坐到了自己的yǐ(椅)子上了,会就开始了,我才看见学前班的小朋友也来chān(参)加我们的庆祝“六一”儿童节的会,学前班的小朋友表yǎn(演)节目,学前班的小朋友把节目表yǎn(演)完了,就该二年级表yǎn(演),反正就是学前班到六年级,过了一会学前班到六年级都表yǎn(演)完了,会也完了。我们duān(端)起yǐ(椅)子回教室,我们把椅子bān(搬)进了教室,就回家了。

this morning, my classmates and i went to school, we put the cleaning done went out of the classroom to play for a while, the teacher when we go back to the classroom, we immediately ran into the classroom, and my classmates and i sat down on his seat, l ā (pull) class l í n (bell), us with y (chair) its son go out, came to the school on the playground. we put the y its (chair) on the ground, we sat in the y (chair) above its promoter. i saw 1~6 grade y (chair) to its sub moved in the playground, r á n (of course) students are sitting at their y its (chair) on the child, will start, i just saw the pre-school children to ch ā n (reference) we celebrate the si_ one childrens day, pre-school children table y ǎ n (play) program, pre-school children to program y ǎ n (play) finished, should the second grade table y ǎ n (play), this is reception to the si_th grade, later pre-k to si_ grade y ǎ n (play) finished, will. we du ā n (end) y (chair) its son back to the classroom, we put the chairs b ā n (moved) into the classroom, went

精选读者点评

“拉铃”写成“lā(拉)了上课lín(铃)”,还把“端椅子”记成“duān(端)起yǐ(椅)子”,拼音夹得又急又真,像踮着脚怕写错的样子,童趣全在这些磕绊里了。

我的同学-my classmates 英语作文带翻译

500字
主题:同学情谊、个性之美、友善包容、自我成长

i have many friends in my class. they’re lovely and interesting. i would like to introduce some of them. alice is very cute. she’s also kind to everyone and she’s very enthusiastic.

she’s always ready to help everyone, but she is forgetful. she always forgets to bring her te_tbooks, but our teachers always forgive her. ben is the most talkative boy in our class. his nickname is “chatterbo_.” he has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh linda is a quiet student.

she is good at every subject but she never shows off. allen is a very tall boy. he plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. he often says, “playing basketball is good for your health. how about your classmates? do you like them? try to admire your classmates. you will be happier.

我有很多朋友在我的课堂上。他们可爱又有趣。我想介绍一些。爱丽丝很可爱。她对每个人都很亲切,她很热情。

她总是乐于助人,但她很健忘。她总是忘记带课本,但我们的老师总是原谅她。本是我们班最健谈的男孩。他的昵称是“话匣子”。他有一个伟大的的幽默感,他总是让我发笑,琳达是一个安静的学生。

她很擅长每一门学科,但她从不炫耀。艾伦是个很高的男孩。他打篮球很好,他在我们的学校队。他常说:“打篮球对你的健康有好处。你的同学怎么样?你喜欢他们吗?试着欣赏你的同学。你会更快乐。

精选读者点评

爱丽丝“健忘”真鲜活连老师都原谅她,这细节像小镜头,一闪就亮。略显“te_tbooks”“chatterbo_”里缺字母,是打字匆忙?下回读一遍再交?

my favorite movie 我最喜欢的电影-英语作文

400字
主题:永恒之爱、生命印记、艺术感染、情感传承

what a moving story titanic is!my heart will go on is such a kind of song that makes me never forget.it’s really a part of the movie.the movie is so romantic,though it has a sad ending.i always listen to this song,it makes me realise that love is so great.some people are living in our heart,especially their voice.as to rose,jack had gone,but the memory is still living on and on.look into their hearts,you will find theres nothing there to hide. ake me as i am,take my life.i would give it all,i would sacrifice. love has such a beautiful meaning.i enjoy the movie every much!

一个感人的故事,泰坦尼克号!我心永恒是这样的歌,让我永远不会忘记。这是真正的电影的一部分。这部电影是如此的浪漫,但它有一个悲伤的结局。我总是听这首歌,它让我意识到爱是如此的杰出的。有些人是活在我们的心中,特别是他们的声音。如玫瑰,杰克已经走了,但记忆依然对生活、对。看看他们的心,你会发现那里没有什么可以隐藏的。”接受我,接受我的生命。我愿意付出一切,我愿意牺牲。“爱有这样一个美丽的的意思。我喜欢这部电影,每多!

精选读者点评

“take me as i am”这句把握有度!英文歌词和中文翻译都工整,还知道标点要对齐,字迹也比上次干净多了,继续稳住!

我的老师英语作文带翻译-my teacher

350字
主题:师恩、成长、责任、陪伴、教育温度

。更多内容请看本站写作翻译频道。

my teacher

my teacher is very kind and beautiful.to be honest,i have never seen a teacher who is so patient and responsible like her.in class,she is very strict with us and pay all her attention to the te_t.after class,she seems to be a child who can play with us happily.in her spare time,she always try her best to help the students who are poor in study or have some difficulty in living with their family.

only did i graduate from the school,i had known what an important role she played in my school life.

我的老师

我的老师非常善良和美丽的。老实说,我从来没有见过一个老师这么耐心负责,喜欢她是谁。在课堂上,她对我们要求很严格,要她注意文本。下课后,她似乎是一个孩子可以快乐地跟我们玩。她在业余的时候,她总是尽力帮助穷人在研究或与他们的家庭生活有困难的学生。

只有我才从学校毕业,我知道她在学校生活中扮演了一个多么重要的角色。

精选读者点评

“my teacher is very kind and beautiful”,这句开头让人精神一振!但后面“pay all her attention to the te_t”里te_t明显是text拼错了,圈出来啦,顺手改掉哈~

英语作文-my weekend

250字
主题:童年乐趣、友情分享、观影体验、中外文化

it is weekend. i am e_cited, it’s not because of weekend but “the smurfs”, a 3d movie published by sony pictures releasing (argentina). after i have my lunch, i go to the red star cinema with my several friends early. it’s hot outside, evrybody thinks it’s nothing. time goes fast! on the way home, all of us fall in love with those lovely smurfs. what a nice movie !

这是周末。我很高兴,这是周末,但“蓝精灵”,由索尼电影发行(阿根廷)出版了3d电影,不是因为。之后,我有我的午餐,我去红星电_和我的几个朋友早。它的外面很热,大家都认为这没什么。时间过得很快!在回家的路上,我们都爱上了这些可爱的蓝精灵。真是一个好电影!

精选读者点评

标点乱跑,句号逗号混着用;“e_cited”“evrybody”这种拼写像打字机卡壳了;中英文混搭得有点懵,“红星电_”后面那个下划线是漏打字还是故意留白?再读三遍,把句子喘气的地方标清楚。

改善我们的环境

350字
主题:环保、行动、责任、洁净、家园

良好的环境能使人觉得愉快。改善环境,使我们的生活。我们应该做什么来改善我们的环境?

我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂废水流入河流,湖泊和田野。每当我们看到地上的垃圾,我们应该把它捡起来扔到垃圾桶。不要在公共场所吐痰。不要在公共墙上画。这是我们的职责,保持地球的干净和整洁的。

improve our environment

good environment can make people feel happy. to improve the environment means to qualify our life . what should we do to improve our environment ?

we should plant more trees . and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . don’t spit in public places . don’t draw on public walls . it’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .

精选读者点评

这个“种树—捡垃圾—不吐痰”的思路很真心!但第三段突然冒出英文,像悄悄话被老师听见了,中文作文里,英文句子最好翻译成中文,或者干脆删掉,让整篇呼吸更均匀。

grow

550字
主题:生命萌发、耐心守候、自然教育、成长喜悦、劳动实践

英文: grow, little rosemary it is march.and it is almost spring. the dirt is still cold. today,we will grow herbs. we put dirt in square trays. we push seeds in the dirt and cover them. i whisper to my tray every day. grow,little rosemary,grow!i say. every morning,i run to my tray. but,i only see dirt. grow,little rosemary,grow!i say. i give her tiny drops of water. she grows inside the dirt. i wait and wait. then,i see something green! little rosemary peeks out at me! i put her by the window. she feels the sun. soon,little rosemary grows a stem and some leaves. little rosemary is green and furry,now. she smells good! little rosemary is not little any more. now,i can take her home. i am glad little rosemary is here. i grew her by myself.

译文: 生长,小迷迭香 三月份。差不多到了春季。 泥土仍然是寒冷的。 今天,我们将种芳草。 我们放泥土在矩形碟子里面。 我们把种子把放在泥土里面并覆盖他们。 我每一天悄悄地对我的碟子说。 生长,小迷迭香,生长!我说。 我给她很少的水滴。 她生长在泥土里面。 我等啊等。 然后,我看到一些绿色的东西! 小迷迭香偷偷出来看我! 我把她放在窗户边上。 她感受到阳光。 很快,小迷迭香长出了茎 和一些叶子。 现在小迷迭香是绿的和毛毛的。 她闻起来味道很好! 小迷迭香不再是小的。 现在,我能带她回家。 我很高兴小迷迭香在这里。 我自己让她长大了。

精选读者点评

小迷迭香“偷偷出来看我”,这句透着灵气!拟人不硬拗,是孩子踮着脚尖看见生命的惊喜。后文“毛毛的”“闻起来味道很好”也全是身体记忆,比写“翠绿挺拔”有力多啦。

英语作文范文-my teacher

350字
主题:师爱、成长、健康生活、师生情、课堂趣味

。更多内容请看本站写作翻译频道。

my teacher is miss _ie . her name is _ie yuying . she’s our english teacher. her class is so much fun.

she has long hair, she’s tall and strong , she’s pretty and active .she’s very cute . she’s kind . but she’s evry strict.

her farourite day is firday. she’s often read books and play ping-pong.her favourite food is vegetables ,because they’re tasty and healthy .her favourite fruit are apples ,becase they’re fresh and sweet.

i like my english teacher .we all like her.

我的老师是miss谢。她的名字叫谢玉英。她是我们的英语老师。她的课很有趣。 她有长长的头发,她高大强壮,她很漂亮,她很可爱,活跃。她很和蔼。但她是非常严格的。 她最喜欢的一天是星期五。她常常看书和玩ping-pong.her最喜欢的食物是蔬菜,因为它们很好吃和健康。她最喜欢的水果是苹果,因为他们是新鲜和甜蜜。 我喜欢我的英语老师。我们大家都喜欢她。

精选读者点评

谢老师读到这儿笑出声啦!“她高大强壮”,咱班谁偷偷练举重了?还有“ping-pong”感染力强,下回试试加个“duang”音效?错字和大小写悄悄圈出来啦,别嫌啰嗦哈~

my day 我的一天-简单英语作文带翻译

250字
主题:快乐、友谊、自然、美食、家庭、时光

today,we were went to the beach.the weather liked fine.we were swam and played beach volleyball.our lunch was very delicious.there people were very friendly.we had a great feeling.we also fished many big fish.they were very delicacy.we had dinner in a big restaurant.there were many nice food.we came back home was nine o,clock.

今天,我们是去海滩。天气喜欢好。我们是游泳,玩沙滩排球。午饭是非常美味。那里的人们都非常友好。我们有一个伟大的感觉。我们还捕捞许多大鱼。他们很美味。我们已经晚餐在一家大餐厅。有很多好吃的食物。我们回家是九o,时钟。

精选读者点评

“were went”“were swam”写得理直气壮,还敢用“there people were very friendly”当主干句,语法在跳街舞啊!平心而论“we had a great feeling”这句,愣是让我读出点阳光晒在胳膊上的温度来。